Description de job en Anglais

.EOC: Vous devez décrire le job d'été choisi (emploi, conditions, salaire, avantages etc), expliquer comment vous allez vous y rendre (transport) raconter ce que vous ferez de plus sur votre temps libre (visites, activités, voyages etc) et développer un argumentaire pour convaincre vos parents de vous laisser partir » B1-B1+ 

Mom i find the job but it’s a New York,

I choose waitress in a restaurant

It’s in Broodway AV. New York City

I will be working two time per days during six months

I will be serving meals to clients in a french restaurant

I will be eating in the restaurant but sharing a flat

I will earn five hundred dollars per week

I will work for six months

I will send a convering letter and CV to the restaurant

Can you take me to the aiport

I have booked my ticket on the internet

I will fly to PARIS i will change flights to NW

I will a taxi to my appartement  

I will visit New York City during my free time

I will visit statue of the liberty

I will go to washington square park and china town

I will go to make the galleria mall

I will go see a match of american football

You should let me go first of all i will improve my English become fluent

Then i will have a work experience

I will be more responsable, mature , autonomous and sociable

I will discover a new culture, a new country, new food

I would like really go there

Yet i agree with you when you say that it is far , but i think that its will open doors in the trade

In my opinion you should let me go , i will phone you every day

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