Exemple discours descriptif anglais

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Audrey

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The old abandonned school

How could this path would be so long ? Rose was walking in the deep, boorish forest for a few miles now. Her car broke-down and the only hope she had was to find a warm and comfortable house. At a point, she found a scratched sign written « Warning school » illustrated with two creepy children. Right behind this sign was a dilapidated yellow school-bus, and in front of this wreck was an old abandonned school. The young lady stepped to the shabby doors of the building, if we can still call this a building, she was starting to feel worried. She put her shaking slim hand on the cold and rusty handle. She struggled opening the door, but hardly pushed it and tripped over feet. Why did she do that ? What was the point ? Rose was too curious.

When Rose stepped in, a strong odor mixed with moist, mud and mold came up to her nose. It forced her to grumble and to raise her hand up to her freezing nose. Rose quickly analysed the place she arrived in. On her left were damaged stairs, in front of her was an endless corridor and on her left were classrooms. Rose traipsed forward. The school was in an awful mess with debris all over the floor. She gave a look in every rooms she past next to. But the more she trespassed the more she felt insecure, troubled. Something special happened in this school, she sensed it but Rose didn't know what. The walls were apparently blue and red, but they were worn and it was hard to distinguished the colors. Suddenly she felt extremly spooked and heard whispers. Rose tilted her head up and saw a « Nursery » indication.

Rose decided to enter in the room. There was a small porcelain doll. The nursery was surpisingly tidied, no foul smell, but an unsettled and mortified atmosphere. Rose carefully grabbed the effigy, it was adorned in a torned red dress, her skin was cracked. Rose unexpectedly heard a child laugh. She cowed, dropped the doll and ran away. The lady thought that she was lucky to be able to go the distance. She jumped into her car. She switched the ignition. The car vroomed and Rose sighed. She was finally out of there.

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