Dissertation en anglais

Hello everyone!
So I am a young inventor. I have already invented a multitude of gadgets but I will turn to robots.
Today I will present you to a robot that will change your daily life.
The name of this invention is the waking abdel. You want to save more time. Are you tired of being late? To prepare breakfast? or not to know what to wear?
I have the solution for you! It is a smart robot and easy to use. ...

This invention is extraordinary because it wakes you up according to your planning. It dresses you according to the weather and according to the fashion modes. And of course it prepares your breakfast in a balanced way. He prepares your bathroom by heating your shower to the temperature.
After scanning you, the Abdelwaking, offers a series of outfit in your dressing room.

Hello everyone so I am a young inventor of fascinating objects that help people in everyday life, I invented many things of which this project, which will be fascinate you I'm sure…

I will present you today a revolutionary invention that will change your daily life. The name of this invention is Doctor2.0. Are you tired of waiting in a small mess to see your doctor? Tired of suffering the diseases of others. You want to save more time. Now I have a solution for you !!!! It is a smart robot and easy to use. It is wonderful and at the forefront of technology ... This invention is extraordinary because it allows patients to be diagnosed as quickly as possible. It has the capabilities of a general doctor and all its functions: like taking the tension, the temperature. We are convinced that this will be very useful for you.It will be used in hospitals but also in commercial centers. Surely you find that crazy but this is tomorrow. The average cost of a robot is two hundred thousand euro. I know it's expensive, but we're counting on you. So what are you waiting for to move the world forward?

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